The Great Ocean Voyage
It was a Cold and Dark night when the captain of the greatest ship in the world herd knocking at his door. When he opened the door the town messenger was outside waiting for him. The messenger then said with barley any breath left that the king was warning the captains crew that there was suspicion of gold on a far ocean island and that the crew need to bring back the gold before anyone else did.
Immediately after he herd the news the captain quickly gathered his crew and set sail to go deep into the ocean. The mission had begun. Through a couple of days the water had stayed fairly calm but one night an enormous storm was spotted strait ahead. All the crew members then warned the caption of the difficulty they were about to face but the caption did not hold back and ordered the crew to go on. That night the wind roared and the waves strongly crashed against the ships bow. Just as the crew was about to give up the crew shouted ‘land how’. The captain reached for his binoculars and looked out beyond the wretched storm and finally saw the island.
When the crew walked on to the island they saw a chest on the other side but, in between them and the chest was a huge, hungry tiger but just like in the storm the captain led his crew to fight off the tiger and retrieve the chest. The crew brought the chest back to the ship and opened it and in the chest laid more gold than you would ever imagine. The voyage was a great success.
Very fun short story. You described things well which made it easy for the reader to visualize the story. Well done!
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