Thursday, March 10, 2011

2081 writing

Thursday, March 10, 2011
10:06 AM

The year was 2081 and the great, intelligent, athletic and incredibly hansom Sir Daniel Lawrence Ketterman the 1st had been in rule of his kingdom for nearly 50 years. His many kind servants within his palace all took time to bow in his greatness every 2 hours in the great hall of greatness inside of the palace. One day a servant dreamt of the day that he would soon become king yet he knew that he would obviously never beat the great king Ketterman in a duel. Even with many doubts the servant finally challenged the mighty king to a battle. The day of the great faceoff began with the great king riding in on his strong and speedy horse as he rode in the crowed of the coliseum cheered and cried in his greatness to the point in which many people passed out on the ground. As his opponent entered the booing and throwing of cups began in every seat of the vast stadium. As the duel began the small boy began to charge yet not at the king. He simply ran out the door in the kings intimidation. The crowd cheered in celebration and the king was once again in power of his great society.

1 comment:

  1. Though it was a little creepy in the sense of self boasting, it was a well written piece with only a few grammatical errors.

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